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// John //// Mar. 2, 09 // // This is an adventure story called The Incredible Journey, chapter one. It is written by Sheila Burnford, and published by Bantam Doubleday in 1960 to 1961. The pictures are in black and white, and there is only one picture in this chapter. // // There is a cat, two dogs, Mr. L, Miss. Oakes. It takes place in Ontario, at Mr. L’s house; everything was in a quiet mood. // // The problem was Mr.L was leaving, the problem wasn’t solved yet. // // The turning point was when the note got knocked into the fire by he cat. The author is trying to say don’t play by fires. // // The worst part was when Miss. Oakes wasn’t listening. The best part was when the cat knocked over the note into the fire. //
 * //__ The Incredible Journey Chap. 1 __//**